Critiques Here

Clare Hawkinson

→BFA PT 2026

OPENING This is a quest its for identity

Give yourself a Clumsy Tool
a Substrate Entangled
a Legibility is Unimportant
an Accident a Memory in Itself
yes Memory but also Absence of Memory
then let your Memories metabolize.

Internal external framing:
I am planning irony
an irony I am
(more interested in)
makes interest
(in)
and starts to walk
(vibrating in)

The system shocked space
The system shocked space
of surface questioning
continues with themes
of remembering
industrial essence
in talking relevance
make it revelate
make it contemplate

Proximate makes object to body
makes man make material
makes my view point
impose it

What means it
to give the secret
to feel tender as
the hand that formed it

“I don’t know i just”
Do away with the substrate
Straight straight drawl
Industrial man manipulate
Macro micro implicate
Miraculous abilitate
of these
to be
compressed
down
“Really enjoy the surface”
“You treat it real nice thats”
“O” as god
gets on
linked in
kind of
edged in
light like
“Somethings that's”
Dessicated almost
ridiculous and
Developing
orally unplanned into
Consistent bouts
collected moment’s
Closer moving is
clarity’s intent but
That doesn’t work
“Always been apparent.”

Transparency your parent
buzzes to the clock
moves in and out between
beaten up and backdrop

It does feel like a whisper right?

Bad boy doing
butterflies again but
notability and
credibility go
hand in
Hand gives
AI flowers like
candy or catnip

CLOSING Which is obviously an utterly fruitless pursuit

Clare Hawkinson is feeding on phrases like catnip.